If only dreams had wings,
I would be where I had wanted to be
If only shadows don't stray so far off;
My destiny assured would bring me peace of minds
If only dreams had wings,
I'd have met my man from Tokyo by now
If the roses still blooms, tended less;
Less worries that I will for so long plough
If only dreams had wings,
Low grounds will my feet fear
If money had meant no value at all;
Off every luxury should my feet wear
If only dreams had wings,
There will be those bright lights;
Very eager to blind me into void's air-tights
If my
dreams had wings
If only
dreams had wings
Shouldn’t I be flying by now?
3 comments:
This is lovely. The 3rd stanza is perfect. I think it's last line should be 'of every..'. And also I think u could have ended it better. Thumbs up gal all the same
Perfection is in the eye of its beholder, well in this case, its reader.. a message is passed across by a writer to its reader, the reader choses to interpret that message however suits him/her..that's the purpose of the message: to affect the reader a way that it affects him..keep reading.. #deeyssertflower
Hmmnnn. You have a point there.. its not about being perfect, it's about spilling out your inner desire. I would go softly on you next time. Nice work dear
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